I finally did it!! Thanks to all of your who have encouraged me to write Transformers fan fic...my first story is up here:
[link] This is very much a WIP, so please give me lots of crit so I can make it better!! I've got very thick skin, and I can handle crit or else I wouldn't be begging y'all for it

I would like to hear the parts you like, the parts you don't like, and the parts that seem OOC for either Jazz or Prowl. It's mainly Prowl thus far, but that's because I fail at writing for Jazz. Any pointers would be wonderful

Enjoy my first Prowl and Jazz fic with the working title "What I've Done" The title needs to change too, so I'm taking suggestions and I'll do a poll for that as well! Thanks in advance and enjoy my little ficcy!
Devious Comments
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Alastair: Don't you recognize me? Oh, I forgot--I'm wearing a paediatrician.
-Supernatural, I Know What You Did Last Summer
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Megatron: Do you think I actually want to spend the rest of eternity gazing at your unsightly visage?
Starscream: Trust me, your visage is no picnic either. And your face is ugly too!
- A Bridge Too Close, Part II
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"There will come a time when you believe everything is finished. That will be the beginning." Louis LAmour
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Ironhide: The Only Natural Disaster!!
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